Thursday, February 14, 2013

Vampire Bites Blog Hop: Fatal Love


Edvard Munch, The Vampire

"Don't go," Savina whispers into Edvard's ear.  "I need you so desperately tonight," licking her lips seductively.

"I must go, my love.  I am due back by midnight or they will notice I am gone," pleads Edvard.

"I suppose, if you must go.  I was just hoping that you could keep me company, just a little longer still," Savina charmingly implores him.

"I guess a few moments will not matter," Edvard succumbing to her whimpers.  

Savina welcomes him with open arms and as Edvard lays his head on her breast, she lovingly and voraciously pierces his throat with her incisors.  

Drabble- n. a story told in exactly 100 words.



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19 comments:

  1. What a great drabble indeed! Savina is quite clever isn't she?!

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  2. @ Dani- Yes, she didn't even use hypnosis! :)

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  3. I love a good Munch-inspired drabble! Good work!

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  4. I didn't know Munch had a vampire painting! Thanks for posting ~

    Popped in from the Vampire Bite blog hop ~

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  5. @ Suze- Yeah, I can see that reaction. :)

    @Tami- I didn't either until I googled Vampire paintings and this one came up. Thanks for stopping by.

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  6. @ Jolie- Thanks. I tried to keep it short (a drabble) because I knew there were like 45 other people to visit on the blog hop. :D

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  7. Excellent!

    Short and Sweet and delicious!

    HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!

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  8. Loved your scene! Savina is qiute convincing!

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  9. @ Elena- Thank you, that is exactly the effect I was looking for. :)

    @ Optimistic Existentialist- Thanks. I know for the bloghops, we need to keep it brief so visitors can read most blogs on the list. :D

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  10. Another man succumbs to female seduction--ouch!


    Lee
    A Faraway View
    An A to Z Co-host blog

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  11. @ Lee- Hahaha! I didn't think of it that way but yes, he did!

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  12. My mind went completely blank after Lee's comment...cool flash fiction piece. I really enjoyed it!

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  13. @ M. J.- Thanks! I know, Lee is hilarious!

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