Thursday, February 14, 2013

Vampire Bites Blog Hop: Fatal Love


Edvard Munch, The Vampire

"Don't go," Savina whispers into Edvard's ear.  "I need you so desperately tonight," licking her lips seductively.

"I must go, my love.  I am due back by midnight or they will notice I am gone," pleads Edvard.

"I suppose, if you must go.  I was just hoping that you could keep me company, just a little longer still," Savina charmingly implores him.

"I guess a few moments will not matter," Edvard succumbing to her whimpers.  

Savina welcomes him with open arms and as Edvard lays his head on her breast, she lovingly and voraciously pierces his throat with her incisors.  

Drabble- n. a story told in exactly 100 words.



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19 comments:

  1. DaniFebruary 14, 2013 at 9:10 AM

    What a great drabble indeed! Savina is quite clever isn't she?!

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  2. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 14, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    @ Dani- Yes, she didn't even use hypnosis! :)

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2013 at 11:16 AM

    I love a good Munch-inspired drabble! Good work!

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  4. SuzeFebruary 14, 2013 at 12:29 PM

    Yipe!

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  5. Tami Von ZalezFebruary 14, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    I didn't know Munch had a vampire painting! Thanks for posting ~

    Popped in from the Vampire Bite blog hop ~

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  6. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 14, 2013 at 3:01 PM

    @ Suze- Yeah, I can see that reaction. :)

    @Tami- I didn't either until I googled Vampire paintings and this one came up. Thanks for stopping by.

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  7. Jolie du PreFebruary 14, 2013 at 5:33 PM

    Nice vampire flasher!!

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  8. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 14, 2013 at 6:18 PM

    @ Jolie- Thanks. I tried to keep it short (a drabble) because I knew there were like 45 other people to visit on the blog hop. :D

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  9. L.G. KeltnerFebruary 14, 2013 at 6:47 PM

    Great drabble!

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  10. Yolanda RenéeFebruary 14, 2013 at 10:56 PM

    Excellent!

    Short and Sweet and delicious!

    HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!

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  11. Angelica DawsonFebruary 14, 2013 at 11:36 PM

    I love drabbles. :D

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  12. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 15, 2013 at 8:53 AM

    Thanks L. G., Yolanda and Angelica!

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  13. UnknownFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:08 AM

    Loved your scene! Savina is qiute convincing!

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  14. Optimistic ExistentialistFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:33 AM

    A 100-word story. I love it :)

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  15. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 15, 2013 at 2:55 PM

    @ Elena- Thank you, that is exactly the effect I was looking for. :)

    @ Optimistic Existentialist- Thanks. I know for the bloghops, we need to keep it brief so visitors can read most blogs on the list. :D

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  16. Arlee BirdFebruary 15, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    Another man succumbs to female seduction--ouch!


    Lee
    A Faraway View
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  17. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:19 PM

    @ Lee- Hahaha! I didn't think of it that way but yes, he did!

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2013 at 9:41 AM

    My mind went completely blank after Lee's comment...cool flash fiction piece. I really enjoyed it!

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  19. Shaharizan PerezFebruary 16, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    @ M. J.- Thanks! I know, Lee is hilarious!

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