tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post7013317255326656778..comments2023-11-03T05:22:21.679-04:00Comments on Bronx Tales & Inner Musings: Rhythm of the CityAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05994415353101258592noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-53532814582094094112013-01-23T08:44:02.006-05:002013-01-23T08:44:02.006-05:00@ Shannon and C.M.- Thanks for the compliments. ...@ Shannon and C.M.- Thanks for the compliments. They are much appreciated. Shaharizan Perezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917164925694287209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-63186419737034610262013-01-23T05:48:20.673-05:002013-01-23T05:48:20.673-05:00Thanks for the visit! Great piece!Thanks for the visit! Great piece!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-22905903911596951242013-01-23T05:11:15.109-05:002013-01-23T05:11:15.109-05:00I like it! Loved the rhythm of it, and the choppy...I like it! Loved the rhythm of it, and the choppy sentences. I like the free form, though poetry.<br /><br />Shannon at <a href="http://thewarriormuse.com/" rel="nofollow">The Warrior Muse</a>Shannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-39962974384956829932013-01-22T11:52:37.274-05:002013-01-22T11:52:37.274-05:00Thanks Existentialist- I was going for the brief/ ...Thanks Existentialist- I was going for the brief/ abrupt phrases, rather than long prose. :DShaharizan Perezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917164925694287209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-5545992297352107482013-01-22T11:50:05.105-05:002013-01-22T11:50:05.105-05:00Great work! Very unique style. Great work! Very unique style. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-51360578994728672262013-01-21T22:09:21.268-05:002013-01-21T22:09:21.268-05:00Thanks Alex. It took a long time to get the caden...Thanks Alex. It took a long time to get the cadence accurate as well.Shaharizan Perezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917164925694287209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6677782007716602281.post-45948064926809564742013-01-21T17:28:00.769-05:002013-01-21T17:28:00.769-05:00You matched the words up well!You matched the words up well!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com